Perhaps you could start by working on your manners.

[ That wasn't physical in any way, no need to get rid of those scars. And... ]

You speech would profit from some rework as well.

[ Truly, he was speaking as would a brigand. And to an extent, wasn't he behaving as one too? ]

Of course, your most unethical habits would need to go too.

[ Such as sneaking on people. That and really, the way he dressed didn't help. ]

And I suppose your clothing style is questionable.

[ Basically. Be less like yourself and more like her. ]