( nothing again. crap. at this rate, if ren couldn't get through to this young man then... WHAM it's like a punch to the chest. his body went flying through a break in the trains, launching onto the other side of the platform and landing hard on his back with a— ) Whoof...
( with the air knocked out of him. wincing, he lifted himself up with a hand pressed to his head. it seemed as though some kind of invisible force had separated him from the dreamer. this wasn't good. if this kept up both of them could be lost... )
Nngh... ( he can hear those voices, though. hear how wrong they are. is this the sort of horrible loops that futaba had suffered from? that even akechi had... )
You...n ne—! ( rousing souji from this memory was their only hope. but the trains roared on their tracks, drowning ren out as he pushed himself to his feet. ) Nev... ve... t be... ! ( he was shouting from the opposite platform, the word were filtering through the space between the cars, if they were heard at all. ) Don... up!
( you're not alone. you never have to be alone. don't give up! )
let me know if i took too many liberties with the setting and i can re-write!!
WHAM it's like a punch to the chest. his body went flying through a break in the trains, launching onto the other side of the platform and landing hard on his back with a— ) Whoof...
( with the air knocked out of him. wincing, he lifted himself up with a hand pressed to his head. it seemed as though some kind of invisible force had separated him from the dreamer. this wasn't good. if this kept up both of them could be lost... )
Nngh... ( he can hear those voices, though. hear how wrong they are. is this the sort of horrible loops that futaba had suffered from? that even akechi had... )
You...n ne—! ( rousing souji from this memory was their only hope. but the trains roared on their tracks, drowning ren out as he pushed himself to his feet. ) Nev... ve... t be... ! ( he was shouting from the opposite platform, the word were filtering through the space between the cars, if they were heard at all. ) Don... up!
( you're not alone.
you never have to be alone.
don't give up! )