It's okay. I don't think a lot of us are well-versed in... well, writing poems.

[That pun had been entirely unintentional; meant to be more encouraging for her to present than anything. But, patience... and soon, he listened to her recite her poem, his expression neutral and his mind maybe running far too soon before she's done. He needed to give it time; there was a lot to unpack... he thinks. He wondered how personal the piece was to her.]

I'm not an expert at all, but I think it was very good. It has the right flow - ah, no pun intended (again) - and I feel... there's a sadness to it.